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Ну найдется хоть 1 добрый человечек,который посмелится и сделает это?! Я лично отблагодарю его...Заранее большое спасибо!
The Kamchantka brown bear is very Very big. It can weigh 400 kg.When it stands up it can be 2.50 m tall. It is very strong with big teeth and long sharp claws.
These big animals are usually very peaceful-unlike Siberian bears.For most of the year they like in thick forests and eat berries nuts and roots.
In the simmer months millions of salmon swim up Kamchatka rivers from the sea.These fish are bears favourite food.Bears travel hundreds of kilometres to live next to the rivers and catch the salmon.Bears are very good swimmers and their thick fur keeps them warm in the ice-cold water.
Whem summer finishes the bears go back to the forest.There they make a warm den where they can spend the winter

Ну я в гyгле, ещё когда писал, проверил, что weighes.

Ну что, правильно?

Да блин, скажи хоть, в каком предложении ошибка?

просто удалите предложение, которое я Вам указала, ошибку Вы исправили. Удачи Вам.

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The Kamchantka brown bear is very Very big.When it stands up it can be 2.50 m tall. It is very strong with big teeth and long sharp claws. These big animals are usually very peaceful-unlike Siberian bears.For most of the year they like in thick forests and eat berries nuts and roots. Bears are very good swimmers and their thick fur keeps them warm in the ice-cold water. Whem summer finishes the bears go back to the forest.There they make a warm den where they can spend the winter.

The Kamchatka brown bear weighs 400 kg and is 2.50 m tall. It has big teeth and long sharp claws. Those bears are quite peaceful. For most of the year they live in thick forests and eat berries, nuts and roots. In summer there is a lot of salmon that the Kamchatka brown bear likes really much. They travel hundreds of kilometres to live next to the rivers and catch the salmon. They are good swimmers and their thick fur keeps them warm in the ice-cold water.In autumn they go back to the forest.  There they make a warm den where they spend the winter.