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    Nowadays many people relate to sport as to an integral part of their
    lives. However, not all of them do sport themselves as they prefer
    watching it on TV.
    In my opinion people should do sports on a daily basis as it is utterly
    beneficial for their health.
    Firstly, sportsmen are said to have good immune system as a result
    of their regular exercise and this enables them to stave off getting
    sick. What is more, for people who are complaining about being
    overweight due to sedentary lifestyle, sports seems to be the only
    way to get into shape and lose a couple of kilos. Finally, when people
    lead an active life they do not have time to get bored and
    consequently sports may become an excellent tool to entertain
    yourself and boost your energy level.
    Nevertheless, they opponents claim that watching sport events on TV
    brings enough excitement and they do not need to be involved in it
    personally. Additionally, while doing sports one may get injured and
    end up in hospital.
    It is also true that
    only by doing sports we are able to strengthen our body and improve
    our health.
    All things considered, while I agree that watching sports may make
    an amusing pastime but regardless of this every person should do
    some sports as it is a prerequisite for good health.

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  • отметь как лучшее))))
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      shaffer
    • 6 лет назад
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  • Смотри, в первом абзаце можно убрать второе предложение которое начинается (However..)Второй абзац тоже можно убрать (In my opinion...)Третий абзац (Finally...)Четвертый абзац (Additionally, while...)И можно убрать это предложение (It is also...)
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      cotton62
    • 6 лет назад
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