нужно рассказать про распорядок своего дня с понедельника по неделю, помогите плиз

в принципе норм, но там чуть не сходиться нужно по серьезней я в мореходке учусь просто), там пару строк подходят пару нет

Ты мне не сказал, где ты учишься. возьми то, что тебе подходит

On Monday I usually go to my college at 8.30 o'clock. When I go there I listen to music and dance like a Mikle Jackson. When my classes finishes I go home and eat my meal. Then I do my homework. At the afternoon I like o chat with m classmates and friends and listening to music. After that I have my dinner. At about eight o'clock I like to play videogames. At eleven o'clock I go to bed and sleep as a baby cause I'm so tired.On Tuesday go to my college at 8.30 o'clock and don't listen to music because I'm zombie. Then as usually I have my classes and go home to eat meal. I do my homework at six o'clock and listening to music. I often want to go out with my friends, but I have no them ( or  I'm too lazy to stand up and do something) and I have lunch. Then I chat with my friends and watching a serial. At twelwe o'clock I go to sleep.//Писать продолжение? Или это плохое сочинение?