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This family was enjoying their holiday. They was spending time well on the beach. They were making sandcastles. Suddenly they  noticed waves crush. They panicked. All people started running. The wave smashed everything on the way. They were frightened but they run and tried not to fall over. After all they were safe and vawe relieved.

Three months ago my family and I went to the seaside on my parents holiday. We had a good rest spending much time on the beach. I enjoyed making sandcastles, my mother liked bathing and my father liked watching waves. Suddenly he noticed that not far from the we were became darker and the waves were bigger and bigger. It was the begining of great storm. Everybody was frightened and started running away the sea. We ran to our hotel too. There we felt  more safely.