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(Masha)Hello my British friend!
-(Nikita)Hello!(Masha)What are your plans for the evening?
-(Nikita)I would like to see the sights.You couldn't help me?
(Masha)Yes of course.You can visit : the Moscow Kremlin,red square
and meny cathedrals.
-(Nikita)Thank you very much.Where you can have a tasty meal?
(Masha)Russian cuisine you can try the restaurant Godunov.
-(Nikita)Maybe you have dinner with me?
(Masha)Yes,I will be happy to keep you company.
-(Nikita)Where will we meet?
(Masha)Let the streer Teatralnaya.
(Nikita)Ok.We will meet 7 pm.Goodbye!
(Masha)Goodbye!

Спасибо огромное!

(Masha)Hello my British friend! -(Nikita)Hello!(Masha)What are your plans for the evening? -(Nikita)I would like to see the sights. Couldn't you help me? (Masha)Yes, of course. You can visit the Moscow Kremlin, Red Square and many cathedrals. -(Nikita)Thank you very much. Where can I have a tasty meal? (Masha) You can try the Russian cuisine at the Godunov restaurant . -(Nikita)Would you like to have dinner with me? (Masha)Yes, I will be happy to keep your company. -(Nikita)Where shall we meet? (Masha)Let's meet in Teatralnaya street. (Nikita)Ok. We will meet 7 pm. Goodbye! (Masha)Goodbye!