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The Land of Died Ships (by Alexandr Belyaev)

The Land ot Died Ships is an "island" in Sargassovo sea. One ship, where were Miss Kingman, Mr Gatling and Mr Sipkins arrived to that "island". But there lived people, who came there like friends. But the governor of "island", Fergus Sleyton, wanted to marry with Miss Kingman, but she didn't want that. She loved Gatling and Gatling loved her too. Sleyton closed Gatling and Sipkins in the cabins and went to offer Miss Kingman become his wife.But Gatling came to the deck, then Gatling fought with Sleyton and won. He was Miss Kingman's husband. They and their new friends left the Land of Died Ships.

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Came there, as well as friends.