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I'm writing for you to get the work in the camp. I would like to work as the organizator's assistant. I don't have a lot of experience in this sphere, but I like to work with children.
About myself:
I'm 17, I study at the 11th form. Earlier I got lessons at the theater studio. I am fond of sports and sport games. I know a lot of interesting games and activities. I read a lot, so I know what to talk about with different people, I can communicate in any theme. I lead the healthy way of life, like animals and nature. I know English.
Active, hardworking, like children very much. I like to help them. Responsible, communicative. I find the common theme with everyone.
I would be wery thankful, if you would get me and would write me the response.

i like help them

I'm writing to you to get a job in the camp. I would like to work as an organizator's assistant (??? что за должность?). I don't have a lot of experience in this sphere, but I like to work with children. About myself:I'm 17, I study at the 11th form. Earlier I got lessons at the theater studio. I am fond of sports and sport games. I know a lot of interesting games and activities. I read a lot, so I know what to talk about with different people, I can communicate on any theme.

I'm writing for you,

I'm writing to you to get a job in the camp. I would like to work as an organizator's assistant (??? что за должность?). I don't have a lot of experience in this sphere, but I like to work with children. About myself:I'm 17, I study at the 11th form. Earlier I got lessons at the theater studio. I am fond of sports and sport games. I know a lot of interesting games and activities. I read a lot, so I know what to talk about with different people, I can communicate on any theme. I lead healthy way of life, love animals and nature. I speak English.  I am an active and  a hardworking person. I like children and like to help them. I am responsible, communicative and can find a common language with everyone. I would be very thankful, if you give me the job, and write me the response.