Переделайте в страдательный залог. Главного героя зовут Дориан.
I was born in а lovely little village. We lived in а nice cottage with а garden. When I was а little boy, I used to play near the old watermill while my mum was teaching kids in the local school. I enjoyed playing in the woods near the village and hunting for frogs at the narrow green river.
I haven’t been back to my village for many years. Now I’ve returned but the place has changed а lot.

Dorian was born in а lovely little village. They lived in а nice cottage with а garden. When Dorian was а little boy, he used to play near the old watermill while some kids were being taught by his mum in the local school. He enjoyed playing in the woods near the village and some frogs were being hunted for by him at the narrow green river.His village hasn’t been visited by him many years. Now he's returned but the place hasn't been changed а lot.