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Мои летние каникулы.
Летом мама, папа, я и моя маленькая сестренка поехали отдыхать в деревню. Там было очень весело мы бегали и играли в мяч. Мы ездили на озеро, там мы плавали и загорали. Было очень жарко и солнечно. Мы гуляли в лесу и собирали грибы. Катались на велосипеде. По вечерам мы жгли костер и готовили еду. Я читала книги. Много рисовала я очень люблю рисовать. Так я провела свои летние каникулы. Было очень весело.

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My summer holiday In the summer my mum, dad, little sister and I went to the country for vacation. We had a lot of fun there. We ran, played football. We went to the lake where we were swimming and sunbathing. It was very hot and sunny there. Also we went to the forest to pick up mushrooms. We were riding biked. During the evening we were gathering around a fire and cook dinner. I read a lot of books. I like drawing that’s why I was also drawing a lot during the summer. That was my summer vacation. I really enjoyed it and I hope the next summer holidays will be even better.

In summer, mum, dad, I and my small sister went to have a rest to the village. There was very funny, we run and play with ball. We went on the lake, there we sunbathed(загорали). It was very hot and sunny. We played in the forest and picked up mushrooms. Ride bike. In evening we burned down a fire and cooked food. I read books. I drew much, I very much like to draw. So I spent the summer vacation. It was very fun.