Вопрос к, знающим английский язык, людям. Проверьте на ошибки текст, пожалуйста. At this stage of my life i have a stark choice. I have to choose my future profession. I would like to become a coach in gymnastics. This is my favorite sport. For this work person should love sports and want to devote all his time. Working as a trainer, I'll teach children discipline. If I work well I will be able to become the trainer of Russian team, in this team coach train children for the Olympic games. In order to be come a great coach, I should get a higher education and level in gymnastics. After 15 years under my leadership will be a lot of young athletes who want to win the Olympic prizes. Career for me it is something that will help me become an independent person.

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Можно ли будет сказать I have to make a hard decision вместо Final choiсe?

тогда лучше difficult

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вместо stark-final так лучшеI have to make a final choice.favouriteFor this job a person need to love sports and have a wish to devote all his time to it.......a level in gymnasticsпорядок слов в предложении поменяем:There will be a lot of young athleteswho want to win the O.prizes after 15 years........Career for me is somethingthat will help me to become......