Проверьте пожалуйста...эссе...How long and do you spend your time on the world wide web? Let us start by considering the facts, if Facebook were a country, it would be on the 3rd place in terms of the population. IT is generally agreed today that in our lives , it came very derable and has already become not ust entertainment,but a necessity, the modern reality of the which can not avoid
I am convinced that Internet use in that if it blurs the boundaries between countries or ever continents. People can communicate without any problems, even if they are from each other a distance of thousands of kilometers. Another good thing about is that internet can be performed with the use of getting new knowledge, mustering foreign languages.
The other side of the coin is, however that most people believe that would network of full information pornographic,violent salable to harm the fragile childrenc mind. Permanet residence the network leads to the fact that children are a little move almost never outdoor
To tell the truth it depends on the parent. parents need to clearly spell out the time on the Internet. and to protect the child from negative information, you can set a filter.
Internet - it is certainly useful, because thanks to him, a person can discover a host of new features make the dream . . If you do not know how to live and achieve goals in real life, the Internet would be help unlikely to escape from your troubles.

И в конце лучше Internet is unlikely to help escape from trouble.

спасибо большое

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