write a narrative using your plan:
paragraph1:Set the scene?Where were you?When?Who were you with?
p2:lead-up.what happend just before?what did you see/think?
p3:main event.what happend?how did you feel?
p4:the ending.what happend in the end?how did you feel afterwards?how did people reacnt?
write 220-250 words and try to include some time expressions

bout year ago in vacations, me and my best friend Mike went to the Grand Kanion to jump with a parachute! It was his birthday, so the circumstances were exceptional. First I was very scared, but he told me "You only live once!" and he was with me all the time so i felt better. When we stood on the edge of thought that is very high and dangerous. I saw only rocks and the gap. After the inventory, I felt that I no longer starting. And then I heard the command to jump. I closed my eyes and jumped! I felt amazing. Free as a bird. After landing, I could not for a long time to recover, but in a good way. I want to do it again and I think everyone should try, because it's totally awesome.