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In our time, the computer has become an integral part of our lives. Information that allows us to use the computer anywhere, including in electronic learning. The question arises as helpful or harmful e-learning. Positive aspects of e-learning is that you can find any information from your computer or to create a virtual model . Another plus is that you can communicate with your friend and ask him for help.

The negative side of e-learning.

The computer can cause a number of diseases such as VSD, mistopiya , blurred vision or loss of vision, loss of sense of real space, central fatigue as well distraction, fatigue and many other diseases. In summarizing it can be said that from the computer more harm than good.

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