помогите составить неофициальное письмо по этому плану,а то в английском полный профан.Отдам все баллы))

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я по смыслу будет подходить предложение это,если я его перед концом вставлю"In September I will have a birthday party so if you want, you can come. There is a lot of music and competitions. "..вот это?

да, как хочешь) даже лучше будет как ты сказала

спасибо огромное тебе)

ахах его оказывается еще надо на обзатцы делить)

Hi, Tom!I had fantastic summer. In June, I was with my grandma in village. It was a bit boring. All July I spent with my friends in the town. We had a lot of fun. In August, our family flew to the Egypt. There is Red Sea, which I like very much. Also there is nice hotel, where we stayed. Flight back was in the twentieth of August. All next time I prepared to school. And what about you. I heard about this sport and think that it's cool! You must to try this because one more chance may won't. I have no experience in this type of sport but very very want to try this. Can you send some photos from Scotland with you and your friends? And I will go to Scotland soon and we can meet there.     Wait for your letter                                                                                          All best, твоё имявсё вроде)кстати, перевод надо?