Проверьте пожалуйста, и распишите, где ошибки)

I believe that professional qualities are most important for a successful career. Indeed, thanks to professional qualities will be a little easier to move up the career ladder. For example, if you're adaptive, it will help you save time and spend on a case.
In addition, qualities such as hard working, ability to cope with stress, ability to take risks, and, of course, the negotiation skills will help you win the trust of the people. Moreover, to achieve professional success necessary education, ability to work in team, ability to work to tight deadlines and communication skills with people.
However, I believe that sometimes quality can depend on the choice of profession. Because there are professions in which it is simply necessary professional habit. Such professions can be piloting, instructing and many others.

Меня немного смущает это- "Indeed, thanks to professional qualities will be a little easier to move up the career ladder.". Сразу такое чувство, что что-то там неверно)

та не вроде норм

отлично написано ошибок я не нашла кроме третьей запятой её не надо