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Hi Rachel! I’m writing to you because I wanted to tell you about my favorite celebrities.
His name Yarmak is very famous Ukrainian singer. He is popular because, he is not rich and has a talent for singing. Many my friends listen his music.
He ordinary man that wants to become famous. I admire him because I like his songs and his attitude to life

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Hi Rachel! I’m writing to you because I wanted to tell you about my favorite singer.His name Yarmak he is very famous Ukrainian singer. He is popular, because he is not rich and has a talent to singing. Many my friends listening to his music. He ordinary man that wants to become famous. I admire him because I like his songs and his attitude to life

Hi Rachel. I am writing to you, because i wanted to tell you about my own favourite celebrities. His name is Yarmak. He is one of the famoust Ukranian rappers. He is famouse, not because of his social position and high status, but because he is really talanted person. My friends all like to listen to his songs. He is an ordinary man, who just wanted to become famouse. I admire him, because i love his songs and his attitude for life.