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Thomas Edison many times fail before he successfully invented the light bulb. Wilma Rudolph could to win a race although she was said she couldn’t to do. The Beatles was refused many recording company. Marilyn Monroe was said she would better to be a secretary or to get married. Elvis Presley got a lot of rejections. But he didn’t stop and became the most popular singer in America. All of these people didn’t give up and continued to go for their goals. The moral of these stories is that the character isn’t developed in comfort.

Thomas Edison had failed many times before he succeeded in inventing the light bulb.Wilma Rudolph won competitions although she had been said she wouldn’t manage.The Beatles was refused by many recording companies.Marilyn Monroe was told that she would better be a secretary or get married.Elvis Presley had got a lot of rejections but he didn’t stop and became the most popular singer in America.All of these people didn’t give up and continued to go for their goals. The moral of these stories is that the character doesn’t develope in comfort and one must never give up.