Я провела зимние каникулы очень хорошо. Новый год был чудесный! У нас стояла красивая ёлка. Новый год мы встречали дома всей семьёй. После того как пробили часы 12, я со своим братом вышла на улицу. На следующий день к нам приехали гости. Зимние каникулы мне очень понравилось, я хорошо провела время. Много гуляла на улице, ходила на репетиции. Я ещё выполняла домашнее задание. Вот так я провела зимние каникулы. Эти каникулы были замечательными.
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Да

Конечно правильно!!!

I spent my winter holidays very well. The new year was wonderful! We had a beautiful tree. New year we meet together as a family. After the clock struck 12, I with my brother went outside. The next day we came to visit. Winter break I really liked, I had a good time. A lot of walking on the street, went to the rehearsal. I was still doing homework. That's how I spent my winter vacation. This vacation was wonderful.

I spent my winter holidays very well! A New Year was wonderful. We had a beautiful new year tree. Our family celebrated a New Year together at home. After  the clock struck 12, I and my brother went outside. Next day we had guests. I liked winter holidays very much. I had a good time. We walked a lot. We went to the rehearsals. I also did homework. That was how I spent my winter holidays. These holidays were amazing.