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I live in the city of Ufa. Jalandhar city - the capital of Bashkortostan. Bashkortostan is rich and beautiful land. There are a lot of towns, villages, rivers, lakes, gardens, fields and forests. We live in the forests of different animals: foxes, hares, squirrels, can meet moose, wolves and bears. Our land is rich in oil, gas and other mineral resources.          On the high bank of the Belaya River is a monument to Salavat Yulaev - folk hero. He seemed to welcome visitors who come to us in Ufa. In our country built many new houses, palaces and playgrounds. Every day my city becomes more and more beautiful.

I live in the city of Ufa.Ufa-the capital of Bashkortostan.Bashkortostan is rich and beautiful land. There are a lot of towns, villages, rivers, lakes, gardens, fields and forests. We live in the forests of different animals: foxes, hares, squirrels, can meet moose, wolves and bears. Our land is rich in oil, gas and other mineral resources.          On the high bank of the Belaya River is a monument to Salavat Yulaev - folk hero. He seemed to welcome visitors who come to us in Ufa. In our country built many new houses, palaces and playgrounds. Every day my city becomes more and more beautiful.