Я написал портфолио. И хотел бы попросить вас проверить его правильность. И если здесь будут ошибки напишите их. И прошу тех кто не знает не писать просто так.

Hi Jim.

I always love to receive your message. At the moment I decided to start a new sport. I will have competition next month.
I go training four times a week. After a week, training will begin at 16:30. After training, I usually go out with friends. On weekends, I always go to my grandmother. I think that's all. Write again soon.

Steve

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Hi JimI always like to receive your message. At the moment I decided to start a new kind of sport. I will have a training four times a week.