Опишите ваше последнее посещение магазина одежды

Ооох, спасибо большое:з

Видно, что сами написали, но, к сожалению, много ошибок. I did shopping (a) few days ago trying to find some warm clothes! I went to (the) big mall as I usually do.

Напишите здесь, если еще не поздно, то могу сегодня днем отредактировать

Да, с артиклями всегда траблы

Ничего страшного, все учимся) Самое трудное в англ яз это артикли и модальные глаголы

I did shopping few days ago trying to find some warm clothes! I went to big mall as I usually do. And of course I spent the whole day looking for something special for me! Unfortunately, there were not too much warm clothes, because it's just beginning of September. But I wasn't sad! It's the best time to buy some summer clothes! Almost all shops have sales and it's really good chance to safe your money and be ready for the next season! So I bought an amazing shorts and shoes! It was nice day and I was enjoying my shopping