помогите пожалуйста,исправьте если есть ошибки(они полюбому есть)
и подойдет ли такое описание??
заранее спасибо)

Hello!
Yesterday I went to Hard Rock café in London. In this café the go families , groups of friends, teenagers and tourists. In a café a lot of different dishes and drinks, for example burgers , chips , steaks , salads , sandwiches , coke , fruit cocktails , coffee and fizzy drinks. Waiters serve quick and friendly. The atmosphere in the cafe mint , cool , modern , dynamic , fun and exciting.