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    Jenny was excited she was eagerly waiting for her vacation in the Swiss Alps and now she was finally here.   There were many interesting people in her group and the leader seemed skilled, Janie could not believe her luck 
      she was finally in the distance from the city
       Everyone was struck by the scenery on the first walk, The mountains were covered with snow and peeking out 
    against the blue sky and the air was so fresh, There were always wild wild flowers, Jenny stopped to take a couple
     of pictures, But she looked around and all gone, she realized she was alone



       After a while, Jenie walked along the path and she suddenly saw that the path was divided into two and she did not
     know which way to go. She decided to walk along the right path. After a while, there was a noise and the ground fell, 
    She crouched as she felt that she was falling down , mountains, but she cried for the bushes that were on her way, She 
    screamed as loud as possible, but someone to help did not come
     Then when she ran out of strength she felt like she was rescued by two strong hands, To happiness, the team leaders 
    quickly realized that she was missing and returned behind her, Jenny felt very relieved that they found her on time

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  • сократить сильно не получилось, в начале немного упростила, остальное - важно. Что-то уберешь - теряется смысл
    • Автор:

      aliyarirt
    • 6 лет назад
    • 0
  • Jenny  was eagerly waiting for her vacation in the Swiss Alps and now she was finally here.   There were many interesting people in her group and the leader seemed skilled, Jenny could not believe her luck.   She was finally in the distance from the city   Everyone was struck by the scenery on the first walk, The mountains were covered with snow. There was a the blue sky and the air was so fresh, There were always wild wild flowers, Jenny stopped to take a couple of pictures, But she looked around and all gone, she realized she was alone   After a while, Jenie walked along the path and she suddenly saw that the path was divided into two and she did not know which way to go. She decided to walk along the right path. After a while, there was a noise and the ground fell, She crouched as she felt that she was falling down , mountains, but she cried for the bushes that were on her way, She screamed as loud as possible, but someone to help did not come Then when she ran out of strength she felt like she was rescued by two strong hands, To happiness, the team leaders quickly realized that she was missing and returned behind her, Jenny felt very relieved that they found her on time
    • Автор:

      cobymeza
    • 6 лет назад
    • 0
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