Написал сочинение по англ. проверьте пожалуйста и исправьте. Мне сказали тип времена не правильно стоят. Ну и много в общем ошибок.

Classmates, we agreed to go to the theatre. This was my first visit to the theatre. Had to go away, so I left early in the morning. On the way I thought looks like the theater building , what he is inside. When we were at the threshold of the theater, I saw that he was much prettier than I had imagined. Then we went inside, inside he was just amazing, the interior struck me. After some time the show started. They put me in a joyful mood , i am so involved in the action that i forget that i am watching a play. This view teaches us to find your way in life. it performance makes you laugh and happy. After the first trip to the theater I can say that I liked the theatre.

! we HAVE agreed! лучше on MY way, а не on THE way! ...i thought how did the theatre look like and what was it in the inside! ...IT was much prettier! лучше напиши IT was amazing there, when we went inside! the show HAD started! they HAD put me! i was so...! i forgot...! ...to find your OWN PLACE in life! itS performance, а вообще лучше THE performance

Classmates and i agreed to go to theatre. This was my first time visiting theatre. I had to go (время) so i left early in the morning. On the way to the theatre i was wondering how did theatre look like, what was inside of it. When we reached the threshold of the thatre, i realized that it looked prettier. Then we went inside of it, inside of the theatre was so amazing.They put me in a joyful mood, I was invlolved in the action so i forgot that i was watching a play. This view teaches us to find our way in life. The performance made me laugh. After the first visit to the theatre i can say that i like the thatre. думаю так будет лучше