проверте ошибки She should not have done that. It was not honest, because this act she betrayed him.Why you rigorously approached this ? no, because his father wanted to protect his daughter and save her from troubles . I would look at my previous actions and find my fault . George wanted to protect his daughter from drugs and a bad company . Susie wants to feel grown up so she is using drugs and fleeing from home.why you can not find a common language with your father ?why do you beat your daughter ?why did you come up so hard on this issue?have you had the same problem at this age ?

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Susie WANTED to feel grown up so she WAS using drugs and fleeing from home.why COULDN'T YOU find a common language with your father ?why DID you beat your daughter ?

Did YOU have the same problem at this age?

Did YOU have the same problem at this age?

Я имела в виду, что Вы, видимо случайно, упустили местоимение "you" в последнем предложение.

Да.

She should not have done that. It was not honest, because WITH this actION she betrayed him.Why DID you rigorously APPROACH this ? no, because his father wanted to protect his daughter and save her from troubles . I would look at my previous actions and find my fault . George wanted to protect his daughter from drugs and a bad company . Susie wants to feel grown up so she is using drugs and fleeing from home.why you CAN'T YOU find a common language with your father ?why do you beat your daughter ?why did you come up so hard on this issue?have you had the same problem at this age ?Предложения написана в разных временах. Так и надо?