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Dear friend,I wanna tell you about story, which happend with me yesterday. Relax your body and listen me carefully.It was a usually sunny day, i went to school, all was allright. But, suddenly, i saw two suspicious men, who was walking down the street to me. They dressed in all dark, and one of them carried a gun, belive me, a gun!!! I will never feel so frightening. They stopped near me and start talking about people, who they killed. I losed control on my body and started to run away from them. Fortunately, they paid little attention on me, so I was able to reach the school safely. The End. If you like this story, write me an apply about it and your advices.See you soonStariy Matematik.