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I’m 16 and in my tenth year out of eleventh at school.
I have 9 classes and passed exams, including Maths,English and sociology.
I don’t have any experience of working in a cafe or restaurant. I speak some Russian and English.

Лучше так: I’m 16 and in the 10th grade out of 11.After the ninth grade I have passed exams, including Maths, English and Social Studies.I don’t have any experience of working in a cafe or a restaurant. I speak some Russian and English.