Ребят, написал песню на англ, кто-нибудь может просмотреть и найти какие-нибудь ошибки? ( если они есть ), даю 90 баллов, нужно очень, поправьте если надо короче...

{chorus} X2
I do not really wanna go to prison
look into my lifestyle , find the reason
flame in your eyes will follow me
i forgot your sparkling smile, that i used to see

{Verse1}
aye, this suffocating city,
I'm a very strange man and this is a total vision
collision, I found you, girl and my division
But finding of you was incorrect decision

if i were not stutter, i could change a lot of things in my past
i'am staying in this city and still wating my bus
spend a lot of time just to learn this f*cking rules
but all you need is making life with your own tools

thunder on my hear, thousands on me yea
Catch Me If You Can, Catch Me If You Can

{chorus} X2
I do not really wanna go to prison
look into my lifestyle , find the reason
flame in your eyes will follow me
i forgot your sparkling smile, that i used to see

{Verse2}
i'am dropping this sh*t and forget about all
i can hear my pulse, but can't hear my phone
Every night My stone deliver me to home,
I fly to another world, you will not steal my soul

glass instead of eyes, i remember childhood
my soul suffers, and I can't fell good
buying some wood, my head in the hood
Yes man, I know how to raising my mood

F*ck these liars, I don't step on traps
I swallow you all you can call me t-rex
listen my tracks, she's getting wet
my second personality thinks that i mad

{chorus} X2
I do not really wanna go to prison
look into my lifestyle , find the reason
flame in your eyes will follow me
i forgot your sparkling smile, that i used to see