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Dear Ben,
Thank you for you letter. Sorry, I haven't written sooner as I have been busy lately.
Well, I believe that if you are afraid of blood, but would like to work as a doctor, then you can choose another medical specialty, like a child's doctor.
What about me, I have a couple of ideas, but parents do not really support them. Mom wants me to go to study for a doctor, but I'm not very interested.
I believe that the English language, and indeed all languages, are very important in the 21st century. And not only for my career, but for everyone. maybe you could advise me what kind of profession?


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