Make up a story about the boy’s birthday party and the fun his quests had. Используя слова: Bring flowers, give and get presents , have a good time , be a surprise, get together , feel happy, Bake birthday cake, thank your friends, smell sweet , have a lovely party , Be a great party, laugh and smile, taste food. В прошлом времени. Помогите пожалуйста!

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Tom has a great party! His friends came to Tom's birthday party. Mary brought flowers. All guests gave presents and Tom got them. Children have a good time! Tom's mother baked a cake. And Tom was very surprised. Friends ate tasty food. After it children played. But soon they left Tom's birthday party. Tom thanked his friends. It was a lovely party. Children have a good time!