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Disneyland is one of the most famous theme parks in the world. Now there are five of them - in the US, France, Japan and China. Probably the most famous of all is Disneyland in Paris. The Park is divided into several zones: Main street, Fantasyland, Adventureland, Discoveryland, Frontierland. In Disneyland Paris you can ride on a roller coaster, shake hands with favorite characters from fairy tales and cartoons, explore a haunted mansion . Disneyland is a great place to visit
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Probably the most famous of all is THE Disneyland in Paris.A rollercoaster (слитно).Все остальное вроде нормально.

В самом последнем ответе у тебя and get-и попасть, а надо:and will get  -и попадете. А так все норм!