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Congratulations!You are on the right track. As for those traces of intolerans you still have... They make you seem like a real person, but do not let them get worse.
Говорит David

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David said that I'm on the right track.As for those traces of intolerans i still have... The make me seem like a real person, but dont let yourself get worse