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Hi Lili,
How are you? I would like to invite you to the party in honor my birthday. Do come in 18:00pm to my home.
I’m sure you’ll like it!
Kisses
Jane

Hi Lili,

How are you? I would like to invite you to celebrate my birthday party.

You are welcome to come at 6 pm to my house

I am more than sure that you will enjoy the party

Best wishes

Jane