Проверьте пожалуйста, и замените сложные слова вроде occupies, kindergarten и engaged на более простые синонимы. Спасибо:))

Hi Emma. Thanks for your letter. It was great to hear from you. I will gladly tell you about my family.
I have a mom with a dad and a younger brother. Usually we do not quarrel, but anything can happen. Every morning I take my brother to the kindergarten and to training. He is engaged in hockey. Parents work almost every day, so we rarely get together. So our cat occupies an important place in our family. She is very cheerful and loves to play.
And in conclusion I would like to ask something about you and your friend. Where do you like to walk? How long have you been friends? How do you spend time together? I look forward to hearing from you.


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