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She's working in a toy shop when she's not at University. She helps parents to find interesting toys for their children. She works five days a week from 7 am to 7 on. On her first day she puts toys in the right places in the shop. Now she has a new car, a big house and a beloved family.

She works in a toy shop when she's not at University. She helps parents to find interesting toys for their children. She works five days a week from 7 am to 7 pm. On her first day she puts toys in the right places in the shop. Now she has a new car, a big house and a beloved family.