ПРОШУ ,ОЧЕНЬ СРОЧНО! ДАМ ОООЧЕНЬ МНОГО БАЛЛОВ! ПОМОЧ С АНГЛ,НАПИСАТЬ КОРОТКОЕ СОЧИНЕНИЕ ,НА ФОТКЕ ВСЕ НАПИСАНО

Summer is very good time of the year,because it’s  warm,cozy and shiny.Pupil always have  summer holiday. And I would like to talk you about my summer.I had a good time, but ones summer day changed all.My family and I are going to go to the sea.When my father and I swam, the weather changed.Forethere, we couldn’t had a sunbathe,swam. It was very pity