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I love beautiful Spring weather! Spring is a wonderful season. 

The weather is mostly nice, the clear blue sky, warm days, the trees are green and the air is fresh and clean, the sun is shining brightly.
Spring is never too hot or too cold. It always is just right. And when it is too hot, there is always a little breeze.

i dont like autumn weather. Weather turns wet and rainy. Starting from late October almost every day it’s muddy, cold, cloudy and foggy outside. I hate these awful and nasty days

People pay much attention to weather forecasts, I also believe in it. Discussing the weather is one the national features of the English. But our people also like to discuss the weather.