ПРОВЕРЬТЕ ПОЖАЛУЙСТА НА ОШИБКИ !!!
From Monday to Friday in Vancouver was a Fashion week. Brands from many countries came in the city to show their costumes. For example Massimo Duty showed new big knitting sweaters, Louis Vuitton - boots with big platform. Also on fashion week was very important to surprise guests. So they tried to amazing clothes. Journalists and stylists from all world were invited to this measure. Our journalist Elizabeth asked some designers about their feelings. For example, ..... (Имя и фамилия дизайнера) was shocked in good sense. Atmosphere in the event was voltage and sometimes relaxed. All brands did their job excellent.
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From Monday to Friday in Vancouver there was a Fashion week. Brands from many countries came to the city to show their clothes. For example, Massimo Duty showed new big knitted sweaters, Louis Vuitton - boots on a big platform. There were also some very important surprise guests at the Fashion week. They tried on amazing clothes. Journalists and stylists from all over the world had been invited to take part in this event. Our journalist Elizabeth asked some of the designers about their impressions. (Имя и фамилия дизайнера), for example, felt shocked in a good sense. The atmosphere of the event was electrified, yet sometimes relaxed. All the brands did an excellent job.