Пожалуйста проверти правильно ли составлен текст?

On Monday, I go about my daily routine. I get up at 7-20, have Breakfast and leave the house around eight, go to school. I'm under 2 10 at school. I get back around 2: 30. I do my homework, and then I go out with my friends . I'm having dinner at seven. After dinner, I collect my briefcase and go play with my phone. I go to bed at ten.

а как по английски будет 7.20, 2.10, 2.30?

ну как?

а как по английски будет 7.20, 2.10, 2.30?

twenty past seven, ten past two,half past two

подпишись на меня пж

Нет:I HAVE dinner at seven.Больше ошибок нет

Ошибки били немного)))On Monday, I talk about my daily life. I get up at 7-20, have breakfast and leave the house at about eight, go to school. I get home around 2:30 pm I do my homework, and then I go out with my friends for a walk. I have dinner at seven o'clock in the evening. After dinner, I collect my briefcase and play my phone. I go to bed at ten o'clock in the evening.Вот теперь правильный!!!