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1there are many intresting  places in astana. For exemple : Khanshatyr, Bayterek, Duman.

2 I enjoy visiting these places because there are many things that you cando there : play game, eat, shopping and stuff like this

3 I dont know about the most intresting place , i have may favorite places to visit.

4 looks beautiful, modern

5there are many posibilities and sensations

6 yes i want this very much