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Hans Florian Zimmer Composer
Hans Florian Zimmer is a film score composer and record producer. Since the 1980, he has composed music for over 150 films. His works include The Lion King, for which he won the Academy Award for Best Original Score in 1995, the Pirates of the Caribbean series, Interstellar, Gladiator, Inception, Dunkirk and the Dark Knight Trilogy.
Hans Florian Zimmer was born in Frankfurt am Main, West Germany in 12 September 1957.
When he was a teen, he moved in the London, where had started his composer career. In 1970 on guitar lessons Zimmer metted Jay Rifkin, in the future, they will become co-workers, move to Los-Angeles together and create sound-recorder studio. As a producer, Zimmer took part in creating the albums of the band "The Buggles" - "Video Killed the Radio Star" and "The Age of Plastic". Video clip "Video Killed the Radio Star" has become international hit. For cinematography Hans Zimmer has been starting work in first half of 1980 years, with composer Stanley Myers on small projects, like a «Moonlighting», «Success in the Best Revenge». «My Beautiful Launderette» became first victory in his young career. In 1987 he received nine Oscars, four premium «Golden globe», three premium of British Academy. Barry Levinson was impressing with the work of Hans Zimmer and asked him for participating in creating his new project «The Rain Man». In 1988 Zimmer was nominate on premium «Oscar» for music from this film. Successful full-length cartoon «Lion-King» became triumph of Hans Zimmer, for this working he was received the «Oscar», «Golden globe» and two «Grammy», album became most buying in history. Today, Hans has been leading musical group of studio «DreamWorks». Zimmer and his wife are living in Los-Angeles, four years ago he became father.