Gosh.,
Greetings from Sochi!
Today is my third day in Sochi.
We went to the shopping center "fortune" with Nikita. Here very much hot. Too bad you're not with us. Sochi is a very beautiful city. Yes, Yes, Yes, this is the city where the winter Olympics were held. The city itself has a very modern architecture. Modern streets, towers, the roofs of the houses. Now we are in the Apple Store, watching new iPhones. Sad you weren't there.
Your friend,
Sergey

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