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The biggest problem at my college (или at my job) .. is
First of all, ..
Then, ..
More then that, ..
I thing it is better to...
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Можно написать на русском, а там я уже сама переведу.

The biggest problem at my college is a uniform. First of all, we have to wear uniforms every day. Our teachers say that uniforms help improve the discipline at schools. I honestly don`t support school uniforms. Then, every morning our teachers check our clothes. More than that, I find this checking annoying. I don`t agree that uniforms make pupils focus more on their study. I think it is better to have a dress code, not exactly a strict uniform. It will be better to have a choice. I believe that uniforms don`t influence on my behavior, discipline or marks.