подскажите, я правильно написала?

The picture shows man. He is at the musical hall.He is playing the piano. The man is serious.He is wearing a T-shirt. People are listening his game. He has short gray hair.I like it picture. I think it's inspiring.​

Привет! Текст почти весь правильный только я тебе советую заменить “T-Shirt” на »jacket»! А так все очень даже хорошо!