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Мое любимое занятие - волейбол. Чтобы играть в волейбол, вам нужны: удобная одежда, мяч и люди, с которыми вы будете играть. В этой игре две команды соревнуются на площадке, разделенной сеткой. Цель игры - отправить мяч через сетку, чтобы коснуться площадки соперника. А затем предотвратить такие же попытки противника. Мне, наверное, нравится этот вид спорта, потому что, во-первых, это командный вид спорта, во-вторых, минимальное количество травм, а также правила просты.

My favorite activity is volleyball. To play volleyball you need: comfortable clothes, a ball and people you will play with. In this game, two teams compete on the court divided by the net. The goal of the game is to send the ball over the net to touch the opponent’s court . And then to prevent the same attempts of an opponent. I probably like this sport, because, firstly, it is a team sport, secondly, the minimum number of injuries , as well as the rules are simple.​

My favorite activity is volleyball. To play volleyball, you need: comfortable clothes, a ball and people with whom you will play. In this game, two teams compete on the site, separated by a grid. The goal of the game is to send the ball through the net to touch the opponent's court. And then to prevent such attempts of the enemy. I probably like this sport because, firstly, it is a team sport, and secondly, the minimum number of injuries, as well as the rules are simple.

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My favourite activity is volleyball. To play volleyball you need comfortable clothes, a ball and people to play with. In this game, two teams compete on the court divided by the net. The objective of the game is to make the ball hit the floor on the opponent's side of the court . And then to prevent the same attempts of the opponent.

I like this sport because, firstly, it is a team sport, secondly, there is minimal risk of injury, and, finally, the game rules are quite simple.​