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Philip was washing the car when the fire started.Neil was studying while his sister was listening to music.Harriet opened the door and walked into the house.We had lunch at a lovely restaurant every day when we were on holiday.илиWe were having lunch at a lovely restaurant every day while we were on holiday.Brian was drinking tea at five o'clock yesterday afternoon.Dad was repairing the TV while Mum was cooking dinner.I went to the cinema last Saturday.I bought a new dress for my party yesterday.While Jeff was building the garden shed, he hurt himself.While the teacher was speaking, the students were listening to him.