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1. Изучите теорию написания эссе.
2. Вам предлагается текст эссе, в который необходимо внести
изменения в соответствии с заданиями 3-6, а потом переписать
получившееся эссе (задание 7).
Some people say that it is better to enjoy your money as soon as you
earn it while others prefer to save the money for later. It is a difficult
choice faced by lots of people because of the different attitudes they hold
towards money. As for me, I vote for the former choice, which is that it is
better for one to enjoy his or her money as soon as it is earned. Spendingto
money as soon as possible is my preference because of three reasons as
follows.
First / Also, we can observe easily in the modern society that
dominant philosophy nowadays is *enjoy your life when you are still
young'. (1)
Those trips not only help them to keep in shape
but also provide them different kinds of knowledge and a new perspective
into looking at their environment. Other people spend the money for their
leisure, which helps them to relax and go back to work with enough
energy.
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In the old days, it is said that people who saved money in a bank
understood the philosophy of thrift. Moreover / Actually, economists say
that in the modern world saving money in a bank is the quickest way to
lose it. Moreover / Anyway, none of the rich people became rich by
getting interests from the bank. Living in a constantly changing world, we
should adjust ourselves to accept the new ways of investing our money in
different areas in order to get the most of it. (2)
The third obvious reason why I prefer spending money rather than
saving it is that it is part of the contribution for the economic growth in our
country. (3)
Some countries continue to lower the interests
in order to force people to spend their money and, on the contrary /
therefore, benefit the society as well as the people themselves. In this
broad view, I prefer spending money rather than saving it.
On the other hand / In conclusion, I prefer spending money
because it benefits ourselves as well as people around us. (4)
. Nevertheless, spending money is still the best way
to make our lives enjoyable and worthwhile.
3. Вставьте по смыслу в текст эссе пропущенные предложения,
совместив цифры с буквами:
a) Most young adults like to work for a period of time and then go
for a trip to visit some places they have never been to.
b) It is also important for kids to know how to save money as a sense
of thrift.
c) If nobody has the needs to buy stuff from others and the market,
nobody will think about how to produce useful products and sell them to
make the greatest profits.
d) That is probably the reason why most of the people nowadays put
their money in business to get a better payback.Выберите
подходящие
по
смыслу
слова/словосочетания (из выделенных жирным шрифтом)
5. Замените выделенные курсивом слова их сидонии
economy, input, angle, met, helps.
6. Выберите подходящий заголовок для данного эссе.
Reasons why money makes our lives pleasant.
Do you spend money or save it?
What is the best way to spend your money?