Написати про своє улюблене свято на англійській мові(5-6 речень)

Відповідь: My favorite holiday is the New Year. In most ancient peoples, the celebration of the New Year coincided with the beginning of the revival of nature and usually took place until March. All pagan nations marked his services with rites to the gods, solemn offerings, as well as entertainment. The ancient Egyptians marked the beginning of the new year with the holy birth of Osiris. In ancient Greece, people and priests put on masks and organized a procession in the streets with songs and dances. Women used to tell fortunes on other evenings.

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