change will you ...? for may i ... ?
 
 example:will you give me the book?
                may i take the book, please?

1) will you give me your pen, please?
2)  will you give me your address?
3) will youtakeme with you? 
4)  will you show me the album?
5) will you show me the  picture?

1. may I take your pen, please?2. may i take your adress please?3. may i go with you please?4. may i watch the album please?5. may i see the picture please?