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My first few days at university were being very exhilarating and exciting. It was my first time away from home and suddenly i found myself  on my  own in a whole new world. Although this was been somewhat daunting to begin with living in college with a dozens of other students gave me a sense of the security. With no rules to cramp our lifestyle most of us spent the fist week staying up all night for talking and getting to know each one other. After numerous nights of no sleep however life settled itself down a bit and  i began to pay attention to my studies. University it is very different to school  and it is very strange at first to have so such much freedom. As a student of English Literature i only had one hour a day of lectures but i was expected to spend the rest of the day on studying in the library. I must to admit though that most of my first year was a time of meeting people and learning to be independent.

Вот исправленный текст:My first few days at university were  very exhilarating and exciting. It was my first time away from home and suddenly i found myself  in a whole new world. Although this was been somewhat daunting to begin with living in college with a dozens of other students gave me a sense of the security. With no rules p our lifestyle most of us spent week staying up  for talking and getting to know each one other. After numerous nights of no sleep however life settled itself down a bit and  i began to pay attention to my studies. University it is very different to school  and it is very strange at first to have so  much freedom. As a student of English Literature i only had one hour a day of lectures but i was expected to spend the rest of the day on studying in the library. I must to admit though that most of my first year was a time of meeting people and learning to be independent. Вот перевод(уже с исправленными словами)Мои первые несколько дней в университете были очень волнующими и захватывающимие. Это был мой первый раз вдали от дома, и вдруг я очутился в совершенно новом мире. Хотя это было уже несколько сложноо, чтобы начинать с проживанием в колледже с десятками других студентов дало мне чувство безопасностие. С никаких правил наш образ жизни, большинство из нас провели неделю не ложась спать для разговоров и узнавая друг друг друга. После многочисленных ночей без сна, однако жизнь исчерпала себя немного вниз, и я начал обращать внимание на учебу. Университет он сильно отличается от школы, и это очень странно на первый взгляд, чтобы иметь так много свободые. Будучи студентом английской литературы я был только один час в день лекций, но я, как ожидается, проведет остаток дня на изучение в библиотеке. Я должен признать, хотя, что большая часть своего первого года было время встречи с людьми и учиться быть независимыми.